Tuesday 14 June 2011

Advertisement: House for sale.

We learnt to use emotive words. We wrote an advertisement to sell our own homes. I used emotive words to make my advertisement sound better.


Magnificent Family Home
This is a one in a million chance to buy an excellent family home. With great memories held within and a caring neighborhood all around, this is the family home to have.
With a spectacular 10 hole golf course only 100 m down the street, it attracts people from all over Manurewa. If your’e looking for somewhere to educate your children, why not enroll at Reremoana School only five minutes drive away. With friendly neighbors on every street. You do not want to miss out on this lovely home.
This family home is completed with a wonderful garden filled with big, bright and bold colours of every flower you could think of. A peaceful water feature sits in the back yard, surround by beautifully manicured flower garden. A charming deck area makes you feel like you have stepped into a magazine. This garden is so vibrant with colours you would want to spend every day there.
If you have a family of three or more this home will suit your lifestyle. One room can turn into a study, a beautiful little girls room with pink polka dots galore and two other spacious bed rooms.
If you’re a family who loves cooking, this home has a perfect size kitchen just for that, where the aroma of the food spreads right through the house. A family room with surround sound will make any movie fanatic feel right at home. A peaceful lounge concludes this spectacular living area.
With easy access to an internal garage makes it easier to stay dry on a wet day.  
This house has been great to my family and I, so I hope that who ever buys this house feels the same way. 
So if your a family seeking and eager to find a house than look no further, this could potentially change your life style.
By Siobhan

9 comments:

  1. Amazing piece Sibhan!(: i'd by it any day;)

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  2. Awesome story siobhan!!!!!!!
    How much??? (:

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  3. I really like this piece!!!!!!

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  4. steven cuthill aka scotty19 June 2011 at 23:30

    Siobhan great piece of writing.I am so proud of you!!!! lots of love dad xxx

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  5. Good use of emotive words.


    Josh.

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  6. Great use of emotive words and descriptive language keep up the good work!

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  7. scott daruis and shanay23 June 2011 at 18:49

    there are a lot of very emotive and descriptive words through out your story

    By Scott, Shanay &Darius

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  8. Shanay said :P24 June 2011 at 13:27

    Good work Siobhan you used alot of emotive word and descriptive language if you keep it keep you could be an excellent writer.I would buy this house for any price if it's that good.

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